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As the development of the technology, people can enjoy what the high-technology brings. Before, people watched the movie with watching the screen, but in the recent years, the new technology called 3D gives people the enjoyable...

Dear members of the selection committee, My name is WQ. I am from a beautiful place whose name is Kaili of Guizhou. I am 1.65 meters tall. Dancing is my hobby, but becoming a professional air-hostess is my favorite. I am willin...

我能说错误真心不是一般的多吗- -! i am 19 years old就行了,不要加上this year,不然就变成中文式英语了,i love reading and surfing the internet,love doing sth或者love to do sth,另外and的前后要一致,要么都是名词,要么都是动词,i...

写的不错,书写方面需要提高 Last Monday when I stepped into my classroom,my monitor told us that our class teacher,Mr Sun,had passed away in a traffic accident.It seemed so unbelievable because he used to give us lessons on Mond...

文中从句使用过少;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

一段最后一句改成Now I'd like to tell you some which you might be intrested in. 二段中间We yong people去掉we,或改成the most yong people 倒数第三行去掉kind of

语法没甚麽错,但读起来有点繁复..... 第一段我会修改为: Today I'll introduce my favourite English song -- See You Again, sang by famous American singer Wiz Khalifa and Charlie Puth. I'm sure that most of you might have listened ...

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DAB 第一题问那个女士为何对着老太太喊,是因为老太太想让一个陌生人替她读一串数字,但是那串数字是不能给陌生人看的。 第二题问为什么那个老太太得不到及时救援,是因为她听力不好而且说话还有口音。 第三题问最后两段作者有什么建议。应该是...

写的不错,ingoring 拼写错误,其他没问题 What the drawing vividly depicts is that people play computer in modern life when working,playing,staying at home or sleeping.The picture illustrates that the time of people play computer...

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