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preceded her. The whole family had

1行:xx日期少了。 2行:如果是说“我给我的朋友打了个电话”则是I called my friend. 4行:shall少了个h。 5行:矛盾了,你要他带food还是不要他带? 倒数3行:后面合为一句Could I go to your birthday party?

基本上一句一个以上,如果加上词汇错误那还得乘以2倍,建议重写,不懂的词汇你可以别用。

写的不错,书写方面需要提高 Last Monday when I stepped into my classroom,my monitor told us that our class teacher,Mr Sun,had passed away in a traffic accident.It seemed so unbelievable because he used to give us lessons on Mond...

I am lucky to have my own room. I like my room. there is a chair and a desk in my room. And there is a computer on my desk. There is a little bed that is mine. It is very tidy. My bag is on the wall .There are some flowers behi...

修改文章要注意以下几点: 1.整体和局部的结合。整体和局部是相互联系,不可分割的。修改主题,要看文章各部分材料是否能充分表达这个中心;修改字词句段,要从全文需要出发,把它放在整篇或整段的具体语言环境中去分析。 2.修改和观察结合。修改...

语法没甚麽错,但读起来有点繁复..... 第一段我会修改为: Today I'll introduce my favourite English song -- See You Again, sang by famous American singer Wiz Khalifa and Charlie Puth. I'm sure that most of you might have listened ...

基本正确,语句较流畅简洁,建议多积累些单词用法与句型,只是运用学校的知识的话分不会太高

出现了一些小问题,为你更正如下: Dear Tom, Oh,you have a nice house,but my house is also very beautiful .Let me tell you something about my new house. My house is not very large.But I love it a lot.There is a beautiful garden b...

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