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求大神帮忙看看这篇英语作文里有什么语法错误或不...

基本上一句一个以上,如果加上词汇错误那还得乘以2倍,建议重写,不懂的词汇你可以别用。

文中从句使用过少;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

第一行it前面改句号,it大写。 第二行最后的can去掉。 第三行feel suffer双宾语,去掉一个; 第四行if,so两个连词,去掉so; 第六行第一句缺少主语,改are dying for happiness; 第七行author是单数,focus加es; 第八行on account of后面不能...

语法没甚麽错,但读起来有点繁复..... 第一段我会修改为: Today I'll introduce my favourite English song -- See You Again, sang by famous American singer Wiz Khalifa and Charlie Puth. I'm sure that most of you might have listened ...

I am lucky to have my own room. I like my room. there is a chair and a desk in my room. And there is a computer on my desk. There is a little bed that is mine. It is very tidy. My bag is on the wall .There are some flowers behi...

出现了一些小问题,为你更正如下: Dear Tom, Oh,you have a nice house,but my house is also very beautiful .Let me tell you something about my new house. My house is not very large.But I love it a lot.There is a beautiful garden b...

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个人建议,仅供参考: 1. 在 has 前加上 because you ,将你赢得冠军该句变为从句(原因状语)。 2. set 前的 are 去掉。 3. In the 去掉,yesterday 可直接作为时间状语,放于该句末尾 university 之后更为合适。 4. 建议将 wining 改为 won,从...

我参加过高考阅卷,按高考标准这篇作文得分在平均分以下。 主要需改进之处:1)书写和卷面都有改善空间,比如涂改越少越好,字越漂亮越好,字母占格符合英语习惯等。2)常识:逗号后边不大写。3)论述要有理有据表述逻辑清楚。你开头说有两个原...

建议把it改为he/she以及its改为his/her Mydog Look at the picture. This is my lovely dog.Its name is Bobby. It has brown fur, a pair of watery big eyes with a hint of sagacity.It is said that set nose shows its being very healthy....

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